考生們共勉之~

敏 · 發表於 2008-4-8 12:41:27

原來不少人最近要或快要考試，包括香港會考的安平、風雲、隨心所欲、驅牛翁；
台灣考什麼段考的荀草；呵~還有本人考了一半的香港高考。
不知還有沒有漏>"<

想不到什麼，只好說到了現在~
Never give up！！！
Try our ulmost！！！

希望崇文的各位可以給以上人士一份鼓勵、支持@@~

敏 · 發表於 2008-4-8 13:20:58

看你們英文比較弱，我就分享一下作文的小小心得，
寫信給報社~

Dear editor,
  l am writing to express my view on the thorny issue about(problem) .As far as l am concerned,under no circumstances should we be allowed to...... .Thus,some improvement and preventive measures should be given by the authority and the organization concerned.ln this letter, l would like to scrutinize the yolk of the problems and suggest some possible solutions.

注：thorny =複雜
as far as l am concerned =in my opinion
under no circumstances =任何情況都不
under no circumstances should we be allowed to ignore the problem.
                              倒裝句    被動
thus=therefore=hence=as a result=as a consequence=所以
the authority concerned 有關的權力機構 the concerned authority 關心的權力機構
the yolk of the problems  核心的問題

  To commence with,regarding (problem).There is no doubt that it remains a matter of graet concern.lt is appalling to note that (情況),let alone(情況) .Owing to the fact that(reason....).lt contributes to some adverse consequence,such as ...... .So sad is it that the problem has not been rectified.

  注：To commence with=開首句(首先)
      regarding=with regard to=in regard to=concerning=關於
      there is no doubt that=thereis no denying that=無可否認
      it remains a matter of graet concern=引起廣泛關注
      lt is appalling to note that=驚訝看到
      let alone=更何況
      Owing to the fact that=因為
      contributes to=引致
      adverse consequence=負面結果
      So sad is it that the problem has not been rectified.
         倒裝句                               被動       改善

善用被動、倒裝句、連接詞

連接詞：
thus=therefore=hence=as a result=as a consequence=所以
however=but=nonetheless=nevertheless=但是
moreover=besides=furthermoer=而且

雖然我知道有點徒勞無功，看反應再教......

[ 本帖最後由超君於 2008-4-8 22:06 編輯 ]